Watching you slice an apple at midnight
First of all the knife
you were using was too big,
then you cross-hatched
and lost me,
the heart shapes dissecting
and falling open,
vivid fruit on white
under florescent light.
You declared them over-ripe,
offered me oranges,
and we leaned against the counter together,
sucking orange slices,
making piles of pulp.
you were using was too big,
then you cross-hatched
and lost me,
the heart shapes dissecting
and falling open,
vivid fruit on white
under florescent light.
You declared them over-ripe,
offered me oranges,
and we leaned against the counter together,
sucking orange slices,
making piles of pulp.

2 Comments:
At 8:42 AM,
momo said…
no metaphors...unless you want there to be...the beauty of poetry. :)
At 12:51 PM,
momo said…
I'm not at all adept at browsing blogs...in fact i have no idea how you found mine! help!
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